mugdha: 1. A - very obvious. look for more A's. 2. S - good, but think how much more interesting it might have been if you excluded the leaves on top. 3. D- could have been better composed. 4. T - lazy! look for more (not lamp-posts) 5. L - again, you could've composed closer, edge to egde.
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mugdha:
1. A - very obvious. look for more A's.
2. S - good, but think how much more interesting it might have been if you excluded the leaves on top.
3. D- could have been better composed.
4. T - lazy! look for more (not lamp-posts)
5. L - again, you could've composed closer, edge to egde.
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